What are Dangling Modifiers?

A modifier is any word or group of words that describes or qualifies the meaning of other parts of a sentence. When used accurately, a modifier can inform and clarify. When used out of place, these modifiers are called misplaced or dangling, and can often create confusion and unexpected amusement. For instance,

After declining for numerous quarters, Brian tried a new tactic to increase sales.

Evidently, this sentence intended to depict sales as declining, not Brian.

Witnesses reported seeing a girl driving the getaway car with flowing blonde hair.

Likewise, the flowing blonde hair belonged to the girl, not the vehicle. Misplaced modifiers can be fixed by placing the modifier next to the entity it is describing.

Brian tried a new tactic to increase sales after they had been declining for several quarters. Witnesses reported that a girl with flowing blonde hair was seen driving the getaway car. Limiting Modifiers

Words intended to limit the sentence- only, almost, even, hardly, nearly -can frequently cause serious misplacement issues resulting in awkward logic.

Shane has nearly wrecked every computer he has ever owned.

Based on this sentence structure, Shane should be grateful that he has never actually wrecked any computer, only nearly wrecked them. The intended limit here was nearly every computer. To avoid such errors, ensure that the limiting modifier is positioned in front of the word (or words) being modified.

Dangling Modifiers

As the term suggests, the most glaring errors happen when the modifier is located so far away from the noun that it seems to be left hanging in mid-air, or the descriptor is left with no noun to explain at all.

With long ears dragging on the floor, Claire wondered how the dog could walk without tripping over.

Claire wondered how the dog could walk without tripping over its long ears dragging on the floor. Read What You Write

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